22 January 2012

poetry, love, and a snowgirl

unfortunately i seem to have lost the cord that allows me to download photos from my camera to the computer. i was holding off on sharing this blog post until i had found it. i cannot find that cord anywhere. therefore, i have to proceed without the proper photos to complement the words. imagine them as best as possible.

tonight we had a special guest at youth group. a woman named jill who is a reformed pastor and also poet who has been friends with denise for about 15 years. it was an interesting and different experience in which she shared some poetry, talked about her love of poetry, and gave us time to write some of our own. though she doesn't write overtly "Christian" poetry, she often has underlying themes and a faith perspective that a fellow disciple can pick out. when she challenged us to write some of our own, she guided us by encouraging each of us to write about faith, hope, love, trust or charity - to follow up a beautiful and poetic reading of 1 corinthians 13. although the "love chapter" is not about marriage or romantic love specifically (as she pointed out, it is actually about spiritual gifts), i chose to begin writing my poetry about love as it related to my snowy saturday.

love is oblvious to below freezing temperatures
creating a snowman with fluffy, light, unpackable snow
molding and shaping frozen slushy ice buckets into round stackable balls
chiseling out sockets for russell stover chocolate eyes
searching and scrambling the house for red string smiling lips
with numb gloveless hands and a sniffy dripping running nose
refusing to give up when the head crumbles to pieces
not settling for anything less than perfection
all for the joy and desire of his soon to be bride

(since the photos are not accessible at this point, imagine a snowgirl - we thought it looked like a female because of her "hips" - that is somewhat smaller in stature, standing on a bench by a tree. she has oak tree twig arms, a carrot nose, a brown north face winter hat, a green fashionable scarf, red string lips in the shape of a half smile, and russell stover chocolate eyes. she is...was...beautiful. i will add the photos as soon as i find a way, or the cord)

3 comments:

kate said...

i knew that i wasn't the only poet in the family. very nice work, jillybeans.

Liesl Botbyl said...

i thought someone else wrote this; love it!

Naomi said...

LOVE this jill! Many many blessings to you and Jay. . . .and many more snow people in your future!!